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The Twyning


The Twyning by Terence Blacker

This is the story of Efren, a young ratling born into the Court of Tasting, in the kingdom of rats below the city.

The kingdom is in turmoil after the death of the old king, assassinated by a human scientist, Dr Henry Ross-Gibbon. Obsessed by an ambition to exterminate all rats, the doctor is assisted by Dogboy, an abandoned thirteen-year-old with a gift for understanding animals.


Soon a war to the death rages between the rat kingdom and its mortal enemy: humankind. Hurt and alone Efren finds shelter with Dogboy and his friend Caz, a runaway eleven-year-old girl. And between these unlikely allies a spark is ignited - first of communication than of hope.

Earlier this year I reviewed The Grim Company and The Rook for the publisher Head of Zeus, and they kindly provided me with a copy of the The Twyning saying that it wasn’t your average fantasy story. They are right. When I first thought of a story about rats, I thought they would just make an appearance in the storyline. Like so many other cases, I was proven wrong.

The story of the The Twyning is being followed from two perspectives that alternate between chapters. The first perspective is from the little brown critter Efren, who lives in the kingdom below the city and acts in the Court of Tasters (he makes sure that the royalties food isn’t poisoned). The second perspective is being followed for the eyes of Dogboy, who also goes by the name of Peter, a thirteen-year-old street boy. What directly falls to notice in these two perspectives is that the narration is being done from the first person, so you really get to see and feel the thoughts and actions as Efren and Peter think about them and carry them out. Furthermore this added a very lively way of telling story and on top of it with the short alternating vision of each character there was an even greater pacing to the book, as soon as I was drawn into the story, it was already over before I knew it.

What you do normally see in many books that feature rats is that they are always the cause of many problems. However in The Twyning the introduction towards this is different. Owing to the rather crude way of the human scientist Dr Henry Ross-Gibbon who has set his goals upon eradicating every single rat, in order to achieve his goals he goes pretty far… Peter, one of the point-of-views you follow is assisting Dr Henry Ross-Gibbon in collecting specimens for his studies. But Peter has more than one job, he also workers for the rat catcher, Bill Grubstaff, where they catch rats for pitted battles of rats vs. dogs. It is by Peter’s actions and both Dr Henry Ross-Gibbon and Bill Grubstaff that the war on the rats fully escalates. Amidst the human part of The Twyning Peter does meet up with Caz a runaway girl, for who Peter cares a lot. Caz does make up a few important parts of the story; it did felt like her character was a bit misplaced in the middle of the book, leading up towards the needed rescue of her. I would have liked to have seen more of her involvement on the whole. As for Henry and Bill, I think there motivations were just right and Peter was just a great first protagonist witnessing several events really turned his character around.

As for the side of the rats, you follow young Taster Efren. What directly felt to notice was the ambitious start of the kingdom below the city. In the early chapters you get a complete picture of how the kingdom of rats is put together with the different courts that all have their specific task in maintaining the kingdom. Like the Court of Tasters, Warriors, Spies and much more, with in it the end being ruled by a king. Next to this the way that the rats commune with each other is not via normal talk, but rather via revelations (a type of telepathy). With the current king is dying and puts the kingdom below the city in a turmoil. And with a bit of similar idea to the storyline featuring around Peter, Efren finds himself also in between parties, being offered power from different sides but also finds himself venturing in the dangerous world above where he has to fend off more than he thought. The part of Efren, even though he is the smallest player of the book is biggest part. Terence Blacker managed to portray in Efren quite the convincing rat for leading and taking the story forward. This was especially shown after the first hunt was completely where you get a great rallying of the rat kingdom achieved by Efren.

Overall both these part worked together quite well, mainly so when both Caz and Peter learn that they can do more than just talk to the rats. There are still a few things that were just told to hastily and were perhaps shadowed in the ambitious start-up of the novel. And that was the love aspect in the book, you have Caz and Peter that care for each other and Efren and Malaika. Both are in love just on the fly, and there isn’t any really build-up or true follow-up of this, this did generate a bit of an empty part in the story, there was a light point in all this with Peter putting everything in motion to rescue Caz though.

The Twyning is a story hard to pin an audience too, it can work for both young adults and adults alike. Some scenes of the books, like the bloody vicious battle against the rats were more suited for an older audience, contrasting this were that some of the dialogues were written on a much plainer level aiming to a more younger audience. However this doesn’t take away that The Twyning is a unique story told from two very interesting perspectives. It is pretty much what I said about Deserst of Souls, these types of books fall a bit outside the mainstream genres but a pleasure to read!








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